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1、雅思大作文写作9分范文精讲总结Simon是英国曼彻斯特的前雅思考官，由于创办雅思考试学习网站而在全世界的考生中越来越有名气。其网站上提供大量关于复习雅思的技巧以及颠覆性的建议，甚至还有不少SimOn本人亲笔写的满分作文。这些满分作文由于出自英国考官之手，非常地道，言简意赅，和中国考生惯用的千篇一律的模板作文相比，着实让人眼前一亮，能让孩子们接触到真正可以提分的好作文，相信大家都可以扔掉模板，写出高分作文！雅思大作文详解1：原因分析题型电影话题今天我们来看一篇大作文，题目是：Manypeop1eprefertowatchforeignfi1msratherthan1oca11yproducedf

2、i1ms.Whycou1dthisbe?Shou1dgovernmentsgivemorefinancia1supportto1oca1fi1mindustries?为什么人们更喜欢外国电影?政府应该支持本土电影吗?SiiiIOn管这种题目叫“Two-PartQuestion,并且建议大家这种文章要写成四段，每段具体内容:1. Introduction:topic+genera1answertobothquestions2. Answerthefirstquestion3. Answerthesecondquestion4. Conc1usion:paraphrasetheansweryoug

3、aveintheintroductionSimon说，IntrodUCtiOn段可以只写两句，第一句引入主题，第二句表明立场。如：Itistruethatforeignfi1msaremorepopu1arinmanycountriesthandomestica11yproducedfi1ms.Therecou1dbesevera1reasonswhythisisthecase,andIbe1ievethatgovernmentsshou1dpromote1oca1fi1m-makingbysubsidizingtheindustry.第二段和第三段为主体段落，Simon建议大家每段各写五句话

4、，写之前大家可以发散一下思维，简要列出每一句的论据分别写什么。下面是Simon给出的每段的大纲：Firstmainparagraph:Whycou1dthisbe?1. Topicsentencesevera1reasons2. Firstreason-budgetsforaction,specia1effects,spectacu1ar1ocations3. Examp1eHo11ywoodb1ockbusters1ikeAvatarorJamesBondfi1ms4. Secondreasonthemostfamousactors,actressesanddirectors5. Fina1

5、reason-poorqua1ity1oca1fi1mmakinginmanycountriesSecondmainparagraph:Shou1dgovernmentsgivefinancia1support?1. Topicsentence-governmentsshou1dsupport1oca1fi1mindustries2. Exp1ainwhy-ta1ented1oca1fi1m-makersneedopportunities3. Exp1ainmore-theyneedmoneytopayfi1mcrews,actorsetc.4. Exp1ainconsequenceswou1

6、d1eadtoemp1oyment,income,tourism5. Examp1einventanexamp1eaboutyourcountry!想好这五点之后，就很容易把这五句话串连成一个段落了，来看看Simon是如何将大纲中的词汇短语转化成一个个完整的句子的：Therearesevera1reasonswhymanypeop1efindforeignfi1msmoreenjoyab1ethanthefi1msproducedintheirowncountries.First1y,theestab1ishedfi1mindustriesincertaincountrieshavehugeb

7、udgetsforaction,specia1effectsandtoshootscenesinspectacu1ar1ocations.Ho11ywoodb1ockbusters1ikeAvatarortheJamesBondfi1msareexamp1esofsuchproductions,andtheirg1oba1appea1isundeniab1e.Anotherreasonwhythesebig-budgetfi1msaresosuccessfu1isthattheyoftenstarthemostfamousactorsandactresses,andtheyaremadebyt

8、hemostaccomp1ishedproducersanddirectors.Thepoorqua1ity,1ow-budgetfi1mmakinginmanycountriessuffersincomparison.结论段Simon是这样写的：Inconc1usion,Ibe1ievethatincreasedfinancia1supportcou1dhe1ptoraisethequa1ityof1oca11ymadefi1msanda11owthemtocompetewiththeforeignproductionsthatcurrent1ydominatethemarket.我们可以看

9、出：1,结论段是在改述Introduction段；2,他在结论段中有改两个Part的顺序先说Financia1Support再说外国电影的流行。对于不知道结尾段落该写什么的同学，这两点可以是非常好的借鉴。接下来贴出完整版的满分作文供大家参考背诵：Itistruethatforeignfi1msaremorepopu1arinmanycountriesthandomestica11yproducedfi1ms.Therecou1dbesevera1reasonswhythisisthecase,andIbe1ievethatgovernmentsshou1dpromote1oca1fi1m-ma

10、kingbysubsidizingtheindustry.Therearevariousreasonswhymanypeop1efindforeignfi1msmoreenjoyab1ethanthefi1msproducedintheirowncountries.First1y,theestab1ishedfi1mindustriesincertaincountrieshavehugebudgetsforaction,specia1effectsandtoshootscenesinspectacu1ar1ocations.Ho11ywoodb1ockbusters1ikeAvatarorth

11、eJamesBondfi1msareexamp1esofsuchproductions,andtheirg1oba1appea1isundeniab1e.Anotherreasonwhythesebig-budgetfi1msaresosuccessfu1isthattheyoftenstarthemostfamousactorsandactresses,andtheyaremadebythemostaccomp1ishedproducersanddirectors.Thepoorqua1ity,1ow-budgetfi1mmakinginmanycountriessuffersincompa

12、rison.Inmyview,governmentsshou1dsupport1oca1fi1mindustriesfinancia11y.Ineverycountry,theremaybeta1entedamateurfi1mmakerswhojustneedtobegiventheopportunitytoprovethemse1ves.Tocompetewithbig-budgetproductionsfromoverseas,thesepeop1eneedmoneytopayforfi1mcrews,actorsandahostofothercostsre1atedtoproducin

13、ghigh-qua1ityfi1ms.Ifgovernmentsdidhe1pwiththesecosts,theywou1dseeanincreaseinemp1oymentinthefi1mindustry,incomefromfi1msa1es,andperhapsevenariseintouristnumbers.NewZea1and,forexamp1e,hasseenanincreaseintourismre1atedtothe,1ordoftheRings,fi1ms,whichwerepart1yfundedbygovernmentsubsidies.Inconc1usion,

14、Ibe1ievethatincreasedfinancia1supportcou1dhe1ptoraisethequa1ityof1oca11ymadefi1msanda11owthemtocompetewiththeforeignproductionsthatcurrent1ydominatethemarket.(294words,band9)1astbutnotthe1east,满分作文里面的词汇啦Subsidizing这个词大家眼熟吗?其名词形式Subsidy在剑七TeSt2的阅读中有出现过，和AIIOWanCe做同义替换，意为补贴。Estab1ished的动词形式大家用得比较多，力口e

15、d变为形容词，意为既有的。Accomp1ished同样是v.变adj.,意为精通的，熟练的。大家要学会灵活使用这类形容词。B1ockbuster和ShootScenes这些和电影有关的词汇大家要记牢，可以用于口语表达中。Financia11y不仅是对题目表达的替换，而且形容词变副词的用法也很灵活。Dominate大家背完这个单词不知道怎么用的话就背下来这个短语Dominatethemarket,“在市场占据主导地位”。雅思大作文详解2：同意与否题型今天我们来分析一篇在观点上part1yagree的大作文。以一篇大家经常会遇到的有关TraditiOna1Views的作文为例，题目如下：Theo1

16、dergenerationstendtohaveverytraditiona1ideasabouthowpeop1eshou1d1ive,thinkandbehave.However,somepeop1ebe1ievethattheseideasarenothe1pfu1inpreparingyoungergenerationsformodern1ife.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisview?看到这种问agree还是disagree的题目，大家先不要急于写作，Simon建议大家先来回答以下三个问题并做些笔记：1. Whatargumentsandexamp1escou1dyouusetoagree?2. Whatargumentsandexamp1escou1dbeusedtodisagree?3. Whichanswerwou1