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1、23年10月天域联考读后续写精析原文阅读：Theyear2013markedaturningpointinmy1ii.InJune,myhusbandwasofferedanewjobinGhana.Fee1ingthatIhadacareerbott1eneckasaphotographerandCoPyWriter（广告文字撰写人），I,withoutanyhesitation,madethedecisiontore1ocatewithhim.Whi1emyhusbandengagedinwork,myvisadidntgrantmethesameprivi1ege.Butthatsoka

2、y.Ididn,tknowwhattodoanyway.Iwas1eftiso1ated,homesickand1ackingpurpose.Ournewhomewasabunga1ownearariverthatcutacrossexpansivegrass1ands.Withfewpeop1earoundourhome,Iturnedtonature,whichhadbeenafondnessofminesincechi1dhood.Everyday,Iwou1dtakemycameraandwanderaround,photographingaim1ess1y.Itwasn,t1ongb

3、eforeSeptemberarrived,bringingthefa11f1owoftherainyseason.Afteroneparticu1ar1ybadthunderstorm,Ifoundafinch（雀）一apoor1itt1ethingbare1yamontho1dwithonewingbroken-ontheground.Evident1y,hehadbeenabandonedbyhisf1ock,hisnestb1ownfromatree.Thesightwasheartbreaking.Hewasthesizeofmy1itt1efinger.Hiseyesweretig

4、ht1yshutandhewasshuddering,tooyoungtosurvivea1one.Isomehowfe1taconnectionwithit.Immediate1yIscoopedhimupandcautious1yp1acedhiminacardboardboxwithtowe1s,mimickinganext,andstayedupa11nightresearchinghowtocareforhim.Thenextday,heseemedtoregainsomeenergy.Hewokewithhismouthopen,thoughsti11tooweakto1etout

5、aca11.Ifedhimsomefoodandchirped（叽喳）athim.Tomyamusement,hechirpedbackandevenc1imbedintomyhand.Iaffectionate1ygazedatthisadorab1ecreature,whowasnowbo1d1ypeeking（啄）myfingersnowandthen.Asurgeofwarmthranthroughme.Tender1ystrokinghisfeathers,Ichirpeda1u11aby,singinghimtos1eep.Gradua11y,hiseyesdroopedandhe

6、driftedoff.Icou1dn,the1pbutchuck1eatthescene-asfarashewasconcerned,Iwashismother.Paragraph1:t11wi11takecareofyou.,/murmured,makingmypromisetohim.Paragraph2:Atthatmoment,Irea1izedthatasIdedicatedmyse1ftothefinchscare,somethingwithme,changed.故事大意:故事分析：Theyear2013markedaturningpointinmy1ife.InJune,myhu

7、sbandwasofferedanewjobinGhana.Fee1ingthatIhadacareerbott1eneckasaphotographerandcopywriter（广告文字撰写人），I,withoutanyhesitation,madethedecisiontore1ocatewithhim.Whi1emyhusbandengagedinwork,myvisadidntgrantmethesameprivi1ege.Butthat,sokay.Ididn,tknowwhattodoanyway.Iwas1eftiso1ated,homesickand1ackingpurpos

8、e.Ournewhomewasabunga1ownearariverthatcutacrossexpansivegrass1ands.Withfewpeop1earoundourhome.Iturnedtonature,whichhadbeenafondnessofminesincechi1dhood.Everyday,Iwou1dtakemycameraandwanderaround,photographingaim1ess1y.原文语言亮点积累11. markaturningpoint标志着一个转折点2. acareerbott1eneck个事业瓶颈期3. re1ocatev.迁移，搬迁4

9、. grantsb.sth.允许/授予某人某物5. iso1atedadj.孤寂的，遥远的，偏僻的，与世隔绝的6. homesickadj.想家的，思乡的7. bunga1own.平房，小屋8. cutacross横穿，穿越9. expansiveadj.广阔的，辽阔的10. fondnessn.爱好，喜爱原文细节分析1人物（含动物）、关系和人设：时间和地点细节：重要物品意象：Itwasn,t1ongbeforeSeptemberarrived,bringingthefa11f1owoftherainyseason.Afteroneparticu1ar1ybadthunderstorm,Ifo

10、undafinch（雀）一apoor1itt1ethingbare1yamontho1dwithonewingbroken-ontheground.Evident1y,hehadbeenabandonedbyhisf1ock,hisnestb1ownfromatree.Thesightwasheartbreaking.Hewasthesizeofmy1itt1efinger.Hiseyesweretight1yshutandhewasshuddering,tooyoungtosurvivea1one.Isomehowfe1taconnectionwithit.Immediate1y1scoop

11、edhimupandcautious1yp1acedhiminacardboardboxwithtowe1s,mimickinganest,andstayedupa11nightresearchinghowtocareforhim.原文语言亮点积累21. evident1yadv.明显地2. f1ockn.（鸟和羊等动物）一群3. ShUdder（因恐惧、寒冷等）发抖、打颤4. ScoOPUP捞起，拿起5. mimicv.模仿原文细节分析2人物（含动物）、关系和人设：时间和地点细节：重要物品意象：Thenextday,heseemedtoregainsomeenergy.Hewokewithh

12、ismouthopen,thoughsti11tooweakto1etoutaca11.Ifedhimsomefoodandchirped（叽喳）athim.Tbmyamusement,hechirpedbackandevenc1imbedintomyhand.Iaffectionate1ygazedatthisadorab1ecreature,whowasnowbo1d1ypeeking（啄）myfingersnowandthen.Asurgeofwarmthranthroughme.Tender1ystrokinghisfeathers,Ichirpeda1u11aby,singinghi

13、mtos1eep.Gradua11y,hiseyesdroopedandhedriftedoff.Icou1dnthe1pbutchuck1eatthescene-asfarashewasconcerned,Iwashismother.原文语言亮点积累31. IeIOU1aCaI1发出叫声2. ChirPV.叽喳，啾啾3. affectionate1yadv.充满喜爱之情地4. adorab1eadj.可爱的5. bo1d1yadv.大胆地，冒失地6. StrOkeV.抚摸；n.中风，击球，泳姿，一笔一划7. IU11abyn.摇篮曲8. driftoff迷迷糊糊地睡去，渐渐离去9. ChUC

14、kIe轻声笑，暗自笑原文细节分析3人物（含动物）、关系和人设：时间和地点细节：重要物品意象：ParagraphJ:,Iwi11takecareofyou.,Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.Paragraph2:Atthatmoment,Irea1izedthatasIdedicatedmyse1ftothefinchscare,somethingwithme,changed.根据原文、分析和段首提示句，回答下列问题：1 .原文Isomehowfe1taconnectionwithit.我为什么会有共鸣？2 .小雀鸟在“我”精心的照顾下会有怎样的对比改变?3 .故事

15、开头讲“我”遇见了职业瓶颈期，孤独、思乡且失去了目标，那最后故事结尾的时候会有改变吗？具体怎么变？4 .第二段给定句有什么需要注意呼应衔接的部分？5 .请尝试总结文章主旨续写框架搭建（不唯一）：Paragraph1:iiIwi11takecareofyou.,Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.Paragraph2:AtthatmomentfIrea1izedthatasIdedicatedmyse1ftothefinchscare,somethingwithme,changed.分句写作：Paragraph1:tt1wi11takecareofyou.,Imurmu

16、red,makingmypromisetohim.【我】具体的照顾思考：1 .我具体会有哪些照顾小雀鸟的行为？范例赏析：1. Thisdaymarkedthebeginningofthecareformyfragi1e1itt1ebeing,fromwhichIfedhimwaterandriceatafixedtime定时,tendedtohisbrokenwing,andsangdifferent1u11abiesforhimtos1eep.2. Armedwiththeknow1edgefromextensiveon1ineresearch,Iprepareddi1igent1yforthestartofmydevotedcaregiving看护