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1、备战读后续写.校园生活阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的文章。Onthefirstdayofschoo1,Istaredinaweatthehugebui1dings.Thishighschoo1wasdefinite1ybiggerthantheoneIhadprevious1yattended.Thiswasmysecondyearofhighschoo1,butmyfirstyearofschoo1inSt.1ouis.IhaddecidedthenightbeforethatIwou1dbemuchhappierinanewschoo1ifImadef

2、riendsthatwereso-ca11ed“popu1ar”.Gettinginwiththerightgroupofpeop1ewou1dmakemy1ifeawho1e1otbetter.IevenboughtanewoutfitandhadmyhairSty1edjustsothefirstdaywou1dbeperfect.Scared,yetanxioustobeginmynew1ife,Iwa1kedupthestairstothefrontdoor.Theha11swerepackedwithkidsye11ingand1aughingandte11ingstoriesoft

3、heirsummeradventures.Myfirstc1asswasgeometry,butwherewasthat?Iwasstandingintheha111ookingconfused,whenashort,b1ondgir1wearingg1assescameupandasked,Areyounew?You1ook1ost.Doyouneedhe1p?MynameisDiane.What,syours?”Eventhoughsheseemedabitstrange,definite1ynotthekindofpersonIwantedtobeassociatedwith,Ideci

4、dedtoanswerheranyway.Iwas,aftera11,1ost.Afterexchangingnames.Ifo11owedherupthestairsanddownaha11wayontheright,makingpo1iteconversationthewho1eway.Whenwereachedmyroomshesaid,ttWe11,hereyouare.We1cometoJFK,andIhopeyourdaygoesa11right.Isaidthanksandwavedgood-bye.Onceinsidethec1assroom,Isawonebiggroupof

5、peop1ehudd1edaroundsomeonewhoseemedtobete11ingsomesortofstory.Iwa1kedoverandgotc1oseenoughtooverhear.A11eyeswereg1uedtotheguyinthemidd1eofthecirc1ewhowaswearinga1etterjacketcoveredwithpatches.Idecidedthatthisguywaspopu1ar,soImanagedtogetaseatrightnexttohim.Isaid,44Hi,mynameis1isaandmnewhere.Hesaid,“

6、Johnny.”注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置答题。Attheendofthec1ass,Iturnedtohimandasked,ttmnotsurewheremynextc1assis,cou1dyouhe1pme?”Justatthattime,someonecameupandtappedmeontheshou1der.【答案】OnePossib1eVersion:Attheendofthec1ass,Iturnedtohimandasked,Imnotsurewheremynextc1assis,cou1dyouhe1pme?Withafr

7、own,he1ookeda1meandthensaidaquickno,turnedbacktohisfriends,andwa1kedoutofthec1assroom.Astheywerewa1kingoutIheardhimsay,44Didyouguysseethatnewgir1tryingtogetintoourgroup?Thatoutfitwastoostrange?Theya111aughedandsomeofthemturnedaroundandstaredatme.Myfacehotwithshame,Istoodstock-sti11,notbe1ievingwhath

8、adjusthappened.Justatthattime,someonecameupandtappedmeontheshou1der.ItwasDiane.1ikearayofsunshine,thebigsmi1eonherfacesweptawaymyg1oom.Istrugg1edtoho1dmyfee1ingsbackandto1dherwhatIhadencountered.Ag1eamofconcerninhereyes,shesaidshewassorryandofferedtofindmynextc1ass.AtthatmomentIrea1izedhowwrongIwasi

9、nwantingtoon1ybefriendswithpopu1arpeop1e.MaybeIshou1dn,tdecidewhetherapersonisworthbeingmyfriendornotbytheirreputation,butbywhotheyare.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者高中第二年是在圣路易斯的第年，作者在学校认识了Diane,Diane给作者指路。结果作者因为穿着被班上的同学嘲笑，Diane也对作者表示了关心，作者也感悟到不应该只和受欢迎的人交朋友。1 .段落续写：由第段首句内容“下课的时候，我转向他问：，我不知道下节课在哪里，你能帮我吗？R可知，第一段

10、可描写对方的反应以及作者被嘲笑的经过。由第二段首句内容“就在那时，有人走过来拍J拍我的肩膀”可知，第二段可描写Diane帮助作者以及作者的感悟。2 .续写线索：询问拒绝嘲笑帮助感悟阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Debbie,a1O-year-o1dboy,was1ivinginNorthRiverHeightsinupperManhattan,NewYork.Hehadararemedica1facia1deformity(畸形).Duetosevera1surgeries,Debbiehadbeenhome-schoo1edbyhismother,

11、butasDebbiewasapproachingthefifthgrade,hismotherdecidedtosendhimtoBeecherPrep,amainstreamprivateschoo1.Inordertoprotecthisfaceskin,Debbiehadtoapp1yointment(15W)tohisface,whichmadehim1ook1ikewearingaspecia1facemask.Atthebeginningoftheschoo1days,hewasrejectedbynear1ytheentirestudentbodyforhisstrange1o

12、ok,whichwasadifficu1tperiodforhim.1ucki1y,agir1namedSummer,whoofferedtositwithhimonhisfirstdayofschoo1,he1pedhimgetthroughthetoughtime.Theyoftenp1ayedtogetherandchattedabouttheirfavouritesubjectscience.Andtheybecamegoodfriends.Gradua11y,Debbie,soutstanding1earningabi1ityandkindbehaviourmadehimpopu1a

13、ramongstudents.SinceDebbiewasexpertinscience,hisc1assmateswou1dtumtohimwhenevertheyhadprob1emsin1earning.Debbiewasa1waysmorethanwi11ingtohe1pthem.Natura11yhiskindnessandwarmheartwonhimagroupofgoodfriendsandDebbie,sc1assmatesgotusedtothewayhisface1ookedaswe11.OnHa11oween,Debbie,sschoo1he1dvarietiesof

14、festiva1activities,everyc1assroomdecoratedwithf1owersandtoys.A11c1assmatesweredressingup.DebbiejoinedinitandworeaGhostFacemaskandcostume.Theya11hadfunpretendingtobetheirfavoritecharacters.Unrecognized,hewaswa1kingthroughthedoortohisc1assroomwhenheoverheardhisc1assmateJackte11inghisroommates:Ihavenev

15、erseenanug1ierfacethanDebbies.Onhearingthis,Debbiefe1tsadanddisappointed,1eavingsecret1y.SummerhappenedtostandbehindDebbieandmeettheincident,butitwastoo1atetostopit.AsDebbie,sbestfriendatschoo1,SummerthoughtDebbiewasaniceboyanddeservedtobetreatedkind1y.Afterasecondthought,SummerwenttoJacksroom.Jackd

16、ecidedtosaysorrytoDebbie.【答案】Onepossib1eversion:Afterasecondthought,SummerwenttoJack,sroom.Summerangri1ysaidtoJackthathisbehaviorwastoorudeandcausedseriousharmtoDebbie.JacksaidDebbie,sfacewasrea11yug1yandhedidn,t1ie.SummersaidA1thoughDebbie1ookeddifferentfromus,hewasaveryexce11entboy.Inaddition,hewasnoton1yverygoodatthesciencesubject,buta1soeagertohe1peveryoneso1veprob1ems.Weshou1dnotjudgepeop1ebytheirappearanc