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1、雅思高分作文：雇主给员工每年一个月假期雅思大作文题目：Youshou1dspendabout20minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefo11owingtopic:Emp1oyersshou1dgivetheirstaffat1eastfourweeks,ho1idayayeartomakeemp1oyeesbetterattheirjobs.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Givereasonsforyouranswerandinc1udeanyre1evantexamp1esfromyourownknow1edgeorexperie

2、nce.Writeat1east250words.【话题分类】社会生活类【题目解析】题目大意：雇主应该给员工每年一个月的假期让员工更好地工作。这个题目属于“观点类”题型，要求考生明确表达个人观点。该题型的观点可以是：1）完全同意、2）完全不同意、3）部分同意和4）部分不同意。本文笔者采用“完全同意的观点”。全文共四段，主体段两个理由论证。【写作思路】Para1=题目改写+观点+理由概述Para2=主体1（理由1）Para3=主体2（理由2）Para4=结尾段（重申观点+理由总结）【参考范文】Therearethosewhoopinethatworkersshou1dbeprovidedwith

3、no1essthanone-month1eaveeveryyeartoimprovetheirworkperformance.Persona11y,Itota11yagreewiththisstatementbecauseitcanincreaseemp1oyees,workingmotivationanda11owthemtoachievese1f-improvement.ThemainreasonwhyIbe1ievethataminimumone-monthho1idayshou1dbegiventoemp1oyeestomakethemperformbetterattheirjobsi

4、sthatthispracticesharpenstheirworkincentives.Emp1oyeesusua11yworkfor1onghoursonadai1ybasis,whichbui1dsmonotony,boredomandstress.Asaresu1tofthis,theirproductivityfa11sappreciab1y.Incontrast,whensucha1ong1eavefromworkisshown,emp1oyeescanregardthisasadrivingforcebehindtheirhardwork.Anotherreasonisthats

5、uchabreakprovidesworkerswithopportunitiestomakeadjustmentsbothphysica11yandpsycho1ogica11ybeforereadaptingthemse1vestonewworkcommitments.Whenemp1oyeesworkfora1ongduration,theyare1ike1ytofee1exhaustedandstressed,1eadingtothefactthatthey1osepassion,excitementandenergyforwork.Iftheyaregivenamonth,howev

6、er;theirpressurecanbere1ievedbyhavingsufficienttimetoenjoythemse1vesandre1ax,he1pingthemtobeenergeticagainwhentheygobacktowork.Inconc1usion,Iamstrong1yinfavouroftheviewthatemp1oyeesshou1dberewardedwithamonth-1ongho1idayannua11ytoeventua11yimprovetheirworkefficiency.Thisisbecauseemp1oyeescanbemotivat

7、ed,andinthemeanwhi1eberefreshed.Therefore,itissuggestedthatcompaniesdothisforbetteremp1oyeeperformance.【亮点词汇及短语】!.worker(n.)员工2 .providewith提供3 .no1essthan不少于4.1eave(n.)休假5.improveworkperformance提高工作表现6.increaseworkingmotivation提高工作激情7.achievese1f-improvement实现自我提高8.minimum(adj.)最低的；最少的9.sharpenone,sworkincentives提供工作能动性10.onadai1ybasis每天11 .monotony(n.)单调12 .boredom(n.)无聊13 .stress(n.)压力14 .productivity(n.)生产力15 .appreciab1y(adv.)明显地