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1、雅思高分作文:发展经济对社会价值的优劣雅思大作文题目:Youshou1dspendabout20minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefo11owingtopic:Nowadays,mostcountriesimprovethestandardof1ivingthrougheconomicdeve1opment.Butsomesocia1va1uesare1ostasaresu1t.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofthephenomenonoutweighthedisadvantages?Givereasonsforyouranswerandinc1u
2、deanyre1evantexamp1esfromyourownknow1edgeorexperience.Writeat1east250words.【话题分类】社会生活类【题目解析】题目大意:很多国家在发展经济提高生活水平的时候丢失了社会价值。这种现象的优点是否大于缺点。这个题目属于“优劣势”题型,要求考生明确表达个人观点,即“优大于劣”或“劣大于优”。考生所倾向的一边需要写两个点,而另一边需要写一个点。本文笔者观点为“劣大于优”。全文共五段,主体段两个理由论证。【写作思路】Para1=题目改写+观点(劣大于优)Para2=主体1(劣1)Para3=主体2(劣2)Para4=主体3(优1)P
3、ara4=结尾段(重申观点+理由总结)【参考范文】Agreatnumberofnationsacrossthewor1dareendeavouringtoachievegrowthoftheireconomiestomakepeop1e,s1ivesbetter.However,certainsocia1va1uesdisappearinthecourseofdeve1opment.Myopinionisthatthissituationresu1tsinmoredrawbacksthanbenefits.Themajordownsideisthattheenvironmentwi11bede
4、graded.Manufacturersareprofit-orientedandmakea11effortstoproducemoreandreduceoperationa1costs,which1eadstotheir1ackofsocia1responsibi1ity.Whattheydoisthattheykeepdischargingunprocessedwastewaterintowaterways,suchasrivers,1akes,andoceans,andemitting1argequantitiesofpoisonousgasestopo11utetheair.Anoth
5、erdisadvantageisthatpeop1ebecometoose1f-centredandunkind.Thewor1dhasbeena1teredtoap1acewheremoneyishigh1yva1ued.Manypeop1efocusonearningmoney,showing1esssympathyandse1domgivingahandtothoseinneedofhe1p.Forinstance,somerichcompanyownersbe1ievethattheyaresuperiortoothers.Theydonotcareabouttheiremp1oyee
6、s,we11-beingbutexp1oitthembygettingthemtowork1onger.However,theadvantagescannotbeignored,oneofwhichisthatpeop1e,squa1ityof1ifeisguaranteed.Taxespaidbyindividua1sandbusinessesareastab1esourceofgovernmentrevenue,makingitpossib1efortheconstructionofinfrastructure,inc1udingroads,bridgesandairports.A1so,
7、moremoneycanbeinvestedinscienceandtechno1ogysothatdiseasescanbepreventedandradica11ycured,andpeop1eseveryday1ifecanbecomemucheasier.Inconc1usion,Ibe1ievethattherearemorecha11engesarisingfrom1osingsocia1va1uesowingtoeconomicadvancementthanbenefits.A1thoughpeop1ecanenjoyahighstandardof1iving,environme
8、nta1issuesandpeop1ebeingunsympatheticappear.Therefore,itisrecommendedthatprogrammesusingthemediaandschoo1educationbedeve1opedtomitigatetheadverseimpactonsocia1va1ues.(305words)【亮点词汇及短语】1.endeavour(v.)努力1.1 nthecourseof在过程中3 .degrade(v.)降级4 .manufacturer(n.)生产商5 .profit-oriented(adj.)以利润为导向6 .makea11
9、effortstodo全力做7 .reduceoperationa1costs降低运营成本8 .socia1responsibi1ity社会责任9 .discharge(v.)排放10 .unprocessedwastewater未经处理的废水11 .waterway水路;航道12 .emit(v.)排放13 .se1f-centred(adj.)以自我为中心14 .unkind(adj.)不友好15 .a1ter(v.)改变16 .beKigh1yva1ued被高度中式17 .earnmoney赚钱18 .sympathy(n.)同情心19.inneedofhe1p需要帮助20.besuperiorto比高一等