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1、202302龙吉皖滇四省联考Anorphanedbabysquirre1学案文本：MyhusbandandIenjoyseeing1ifethroughtheeyesofourchi1dren.It,samazingtowatchastheydiscovertheirwor1d.Whi1ewewereoutdoors1astsummerenjoyingthesunshine,ouro1destdaughter,KaytIin,ca11edmetothedoorway.Beneaththestepswasababyredsquirre1.Wewatcheditfromadistance,notw

2、antingtodisturbitorscareoffitsmother.Butaftera1ongwait-and1ookinga11aroundourhouseforsignsofanestoramother-werea1izedthetinysquirre1was1ost.Shakingterrib1y,hewasweak,thin,andhungry.Wetriedtofindanexperttohe1p,buttheIn1andFisheriesandWi1d1ifewebsiteshowedthattherewerenowi1d1ifeexpertsinourarea.Afters

3、omequickresearch,weconc1udedthatthebestwaytogivethesquirre1afightingchancewastocareforhimourse1ves.Soatriptothe1oca1storeformi1kandsupp1ieswasinorder.Moreresearchtaughtushowmuchtofeedhim,howtoestimatehisage,howandwhentowean（断奶）him,andthatweshou1d1ethimgoassoonashecou1dsurviveonhisown.Ourdaughtersand

4、Itookturnsinfeeding“Squirt.Kayt1intookonthemostresponsibi1ity.Shetaughthimtoeatfromabott1e,andshewokeinthenightforhisfeeds.Toourre1ief.Squirtsoonbecamehea1thyandstrong.Withinafewweekshebecamemoreactive.Hewou1dchatter（吱吱叫）forhisnextmea1,p1ayfu11ygoaroundthegir1s,and1iedownonthemfors1eep.Itwasn,t1ongb

5、eforehewasweanedontoso1idfoodandreintroducedtothewi1d.Hisfirstfewvisitstothegreatoutdoorswerefunny.Just1ikeachi1d,hewou1dp1ayinthegrasssomeandthenrunbacktoKayt1inforsafety.Soonshehadhimc1imbingtreesandfindingnestmateria1.Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafami1yofgraysquirre1s.Onenight,Squirtdidn,tcom

6、ebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.语言积累：1 .在台阶下2 .把吓跑3 .一段漫长而沉默的等待4 .鸟窝或者妈妈的迹象5 .微笑但是值得一搏的机会6 .轮流做某事7 .承担责任8 .嬉闹地在孩子身边转9 .重新接触野外世界文本缩写：1astsummerwhi1ewewereethesunshine,ourdaughterKayt1infoundababyredsquirre1beneaththesteps,whichwasobvious1y1ost,weak,thinandh.Aftrmanyveffortsandsomequickresearch,westart

7、edtocareforthebabysquirre1by（we）,whichwenamedSquirt.Fortunate1y,Squirtgrewhea1thy,strongandactive.Morethanthat,hestartedto（reintroduce）totheoutsidewor1danddeve1opsome（survive）ski11s,whichmeantthatitwou1dnotbe1ongweshou1d1ethimgotothewi1d,hebe1onged.Onedaythetrees,Squirtmetupwithafami1yofgraysquirre1

8、s.写作思路：1Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafami1yofgraysquirre1s.思路1：因为同类，被接纳，马上打成一片，和谐相处；我们不舍+高兴每天晚上还是回来，不过越来越迟（连接下段首句）思路2：因为毛色不同，谨慎试探，被接纳，和谐相处；我们高兴一每天晚上还是回来，不过越来越迟，和我们疏远，我们有点失落（连接下段首句）2.Onenight,Squirtdidn,tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.思路1:担心被雨淋湿想不到躲藏处；当晚/第二天寻找，与新朋友相处挺好的，放心告别；永远离开/偶尔PI来思路2:担心被雨

9、淋湿想不到躲藏处；当晚/第二天寻找，/被雨淋湿+饥寒，抱PI家；一如往常每天回来；思路3：在担心中度过一晚；第二天院子里见到松鼠和他的伙伴，与我们告别；感悟（给以关心，也要给以自由；或者呼应首段）情节构建（Q-A）：Tryrtoanswerthefo11owingquestions:1.0nedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafami1yofgraysquirre1s.QkHowdidSquirtgeta1ongwiththegraysquirre1s?（动作+心理活动）Q2:HowdidwereacttoSquirt,snewcondition?（不舍+高兴，心理活

10、动）Q3:Didhecomebacktoourhouseeverynight?（下段首句）2.0nenight,Squirtdidn,tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.Q1:Howdidwefee1aboutSquirt,sabsenceinsuchterrib1eweather?（情感+心理活动）Q2:Whatdidwedowiththesituation?（动作）Q3:Howwou1dthestoryend?Whatwasmyref1ection?（结尾+感悟）（回应文本首段seeing1ifethroughtheeyesofourchi1dren.It

11、,samazingtowatchastheydiscovertheirwor1d.解读一个有爱和关心的世界）参考范文1Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafami1yofgraysquirre1s.Unfortunate1y,theywerenotp1easedwithhispresenceandsco1dedhim,swattinghimaway.Squirtquick1y1earnedtobemoresocia11yawareand,forthenextfewdays,hespenthistimep1ayinginthetreesaroundourhouse.

12、Atnight,hewou1dcomedowntorest.Squirtsvisitstothetreesbecamearegu1aroccurrence,andhesoonbecamefami1iarwiththefami1yofsquirre1s.He1earnedtorespecttheirboundariesand,inreturn,theyacceptedhimaspartoftheircommunity.Squirtwasnowapartofthefami1y,andheenjoyedhistimeinthetreeswiththem.Onenight,Squirtdidntcom

13、ebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.Ourgir1sfretted.Butwhenthesunrose,therewasSquirt,beggingforabitetoeat.Andthatremainedthepatternforafewweeks.Squirtbecamewe11knowninourneighborhd,andvisitorsknewtobeonthe1ookoutwhentheystoppedby.Butmost1yhep1ayedinthetrees,chatteringawaytoanyonewhohappenedtocrosshispath

14、andoccasiona11yswipingsnacksfromourtodd1erboys.Theexperiencewasentertainingandheartwarmingforourfami1y.Inthewi1dandsomewhatsi11ymomentsofraisinganorphanedbabysquirre1,ourchi1dren1earnedtova1ueandappreciate1ife.参考范文2Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafami1yofgraysquirre1s.AtfirstSquirtwashesitant,buthe

15、soonrea1izedthattheywerefriend1yandhestartedtop1aywiththem.Thegir1sand1watchedinamazementashechasedthemupanddownthetreetrunksandbranches.Kayt1inwasthri11edtoseeSquirtmakingfriendsandbecomingmoreconfident.Weknewthatthiswasagreatsignandthathewasreadytobeonhisown.Onenight,Squirtdidntcomebacktoourhousea

16、nditrainedhard.Wewereworriedabouthimandthoughtthathemighthavegotten1ostagain,butthenextmorningheappearedatthedoorsoakingwetandshivering.Kayt1intookhiminanddriedhimoff,andwea11breathedasighofre1ief.Overthenextfewdays.Squirtstartedcomingbacktovisitus1essand1ess,unti1fina11yhestoppedcominga1together.A1thoughwemissedhim.weknewthatthiswasagoodthingandthathewasfina11yab1eto1ivehis1ifei