托福高分范文：更多人选择独居对社会是好是坏.docx

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1、托福高分范文：更多人选择独居对社会是好是坏雅思大作文题目：Youshou1dspendabout40minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefo11owingtopic:Insomecountries,morepeop1echooseto1ivebythemse1vesinrecentyears.Whyisthisthecase?Isitapositiveornegativedeve1opmentforsociety?Givereasonsforyouranswerandinc1udeanyre1evantexamp1esfromyourownknow1edgeorexp

2、erience.Writeat1east250words.【话题分类】社会生活类【题目解析】题目大意：在一些国家，更多人选择独居。其原因是什么？对社会是一个积极还是消极影响。考生需要注意，这个题目问的是对“社会”的影响。该题属于“two-questionessay”，要求考生回答两个问题，故文章结构需要四段,即1）题目改写+简要回答题目两个问题，2）回答第一个问题（2个点），3）回答第二个问题（2个点），4）总结段（总结主体两个段落的要点）。原因：1）人们想要更多私人空间，2）与家人相处困难消极：1）房价上升，2）社会缺少有合作意识的人才【写作思路】Para1=题目改写+简要回答题目两个问题P

3、ara2=主体1（两个原因）原因1：人们想要更多私人空间原因2：与家人相处困难Para3=主体2（两个负面影响）解决办法1：房价上升解决办法2：社会缺少有合作意识的人才Para4=总结段【参考范文】Ina1argenumberofnations,therehasbeenadramaticincreaseinthenumberofpeop1ewhotendto1eadanindependent1ifesty1e.Thisessaywi11initia11yout1inethecausesofthisphenomenon,fo11owedbyapresentationofevidencetosup

4、portmyfirmconvictionthatitisanadversetrend.Thereareprimari1ytwofactorsbehindpeop1e,Stendencyto1iveso1itari1y.Tobeginwith,peop1eexpectmoreprivatespace.Someareinterestedinreadingbooksandwritingstories,whi1eothershaveapassionforsingingorcomposingmusicpieces.However,ifthey1ivewiththeirfami1y,theywi11bed

5、isturbedfrequent1y,preventingthemfromenjoyingtheirtime.Furthermore,someindividua1sfai1togeta1ongwe11withtheirfami1ymembers.Youngpeop1e,forinstance,haveformedthehabitofs1eeping1ateandwakingup1ate,whichisthoughtofasanextreme1yunhea1thy1ifesty1ebytheirparents.Thismakestheyoungergenerationmoveout,andtho

6、sewhosecureastab1eeconomicsourcewi11buytheirownpropertyindependent1y.Inmyopinion,thistrendisdetrimenta1tothewidercommunity.Thefirstpointtoconsideristhat1ivingaso1itary1ifemay1eadtoariseinhousingprices.Thisismain1ybecausethemorepeop1echooseto1iveontheirown,themorehousesarerequired.Asaresu1t,demandwi1

7、1exceedsupp1y,whichentai1speop1espendingmoreonrentandmortgages.Inaddition,societymay1ackta1entswhohavedeve1opedteamworkandsocia1ski11s.When1ivinga1onefora1ongtime,peop1emightrare1ycommunicatewithothers,becomingiso1atedandemotiona11yimmatureaswe11asunwi11ingtocooperatewithothers.Inconc1usion,individu

8、a1s,pursuitofmoreprivacyandtheirpoorre1ationshipwiththeirfami1iesarethetwomajorreasonsforthemto1iveindependent1y.HowevecIstrong1ybe1ieveitisnotwisetoencouragepeop1eto1ivebythemse1ves.Foronething,housingpriceswi11riseconsiderab1y;foranother;societymaysufferfromadearthofpeop1ewithoutco11aborativeabi1ities.