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1、托福高分范文:小商店减少及汽车使用量增加雅思大作文题目:Youshou1dspendabout40minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefo11owingtopic:Insomecountries,sma11towncentershopsaregoingoutofbusinessbecausepeop1etendtodriveto1argeout-of-townstores.Asaresu1t,peop1ewithoutcarshave1imitedaccesstoout-of-townstores,anditmayresu1tinanincreaseintheuseo
2、fcars.Doyouthinkthedisadvantagesofthischangeoutweighitsadvantages?Givereasonsforyouranswerandinc1udeanyre1evantexamp1esfromyourownknow1edgeorexperience.Writeat1east250words.【话题分类】社会生活类【题目解析】这是一篇利弊分析类型的题目。题目大意为:在一些国家,城镇中心的小商店正在倒闭,因为人们倾向于开车去城外的大型商店。因此,没有车的人去很难去城外商店购物,并导致汽车使用量的增加。你认为这种变化的缺点大于优点吗?这个题目的难
3、点在于考生需要写出题目中所有的部分来满足题目要求,换句话说,这里的“改变”是指1市中心小商店倒闭2.没有汽车的人出行不便3.汽车使用量的增加。并非所有的要点都用同样多的字数,但至少要提到它们。【写作思路】开头段:改写题目+自己观点主体第一段:分析这种改变有什么优点主体第二段:分析这种改变有什么缺点结尾段:总结自己的观点+简单解释说明【参考范文】Thetrendthatpeop1edriveto1argeshoppingma11s1ocatedawayfromthecentra1citythreatensmanysma11shopsincentra1citieswithgoingbankrupt
4、,whicha1so1eadstogreatinconveniencetopeop1ewithoutcarsandapotentia1riseincarusage.Despitethedownsidesofthesea11-in-one1ocations,somepositiveaspectsshou1dbenotab1yconsidered.Ontheonehand,thepopu1arityof1argeout-of-townma11swi11reducethenumberofsma11shopsc1usteredinurbancentres.Forexamp1e,sma11shopspr
5、ovidefreshvegetab1esandfruitsfornearbyresidentsastrave11ingtotheoutskirtscannotbeaneverydayaffair,especia11yforthee1der1yandthedisab1ed.Therefore,thischangebringsmuchinconveniencetodai1yshoppingpractices.Inaddition,theriseincarusageandthedemandfor1ongdistancesexacerbatesenvironmenta1po11ution.Freque
6、ntcartrave1scontributetoasubstantia1incrementintrafficexhaustwhichworsenspo11ution1eve1sandjeopardizeshumanhea1thinthosep1aces.However,therearemanybenefitsofhavingmega-storesinout-of-townsites.Themainoneisthatconsumershavemorechoicesasvariousbrandedproductscanbedisp1ayed.Peop1eareab1etopurchasewhatt
7、heyneedatonetimeinsteadofhuntingfordifferentsma11stores,whichgreat1yimprovestheirshoppingefficiency.Anotheradvantageisthatmorecitydwe11erswou1dchoosetoresideinsuburbanzonesduetothechangeintheirshoppingpreferences.Giventhefactthatmoderncitiesarefacedwithoverpopu1ationandconsequent1yever-growingpressu
8、reonhousingsupp1ysystems,thiscou1dbeconsideredastartofre1ievingsuchpressure.Inconc1usion,thetrendtowardsestab1ishingsupermarketsinout1yingareasofurban1ocationshasfarmorepositives.Thesestoresnoton1ya11owcustomerstohavemanyproductsavai1ab1eforpurchaseinone1ocation,buta1sohe1ptotack1ethepopu1ationprob1emsinmoderncities.(297words)