雅思高分作文：再犯罪的原因和解决办法.docx

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1、雅思高分作文：再犯罪的原因和解决办法雅思大作文题目：Youshou1dspendabout20minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefo11owingtopic:Peop1econtinuetocommitcrimesevenafterbeingpunishedforit.Whydoyouthinkthishappens?Howcancrimebestopped?Givereasonsforyouranswerandinc1udeanyre1evantexamp1esfromyourownknow1edgeorexperience.Writeat1east250word

2、s.【话题分类】犯罪类【题目解析】这是一道犯罪类话题的“two-questionessay,0题目意思是：很多罪犯即便是受到惩罚后会继续犯罪。为什么会出现这一现象？如何防止犯罪？对于此类题型的作文，考生需要1）在开头段改写题目，且简要地回答题目中的两个问题，2）主体需两个段落分别回答题目中的两个问题，3）结尾段对主体段内容进行全面总结。【写作思路】开头段：改写题目+题目问题简要回答Body1:原因：a）惩罚力度不够大，b）有犯罪前科的人不能够完全被社会接受Body2：防止犯罪的方法：a）加大惩罚力度，b）给前犯罪者提供职业培训和就业机会结尾段：通过“同义转换”的方式对主体两个段落要点进行总结【

3、参考范文】Nowadays,itiscommonthatex-offendersvio1atethe1awrepeated1ya1thoughtheyhavebeenpunished.Inthisessay,Iwi11initia11ydiscussthereasonsforthissituation,fo11owedbymysuggestionswhichcanassistinpreventingcrimesfromhappening.Thereareprimari1ytwofactors1arge1yresponsib1eforrecidivism.Tocommencewith,thesa

4、nctionsagainstcrimina1sarenotharshenough.Inotherwords,beingpunisheddoesnotmakeahugedifferencetooffenders,1eadingtothepossibi1itythatthesepeop1earenorma11yunab1etorea1isethedetrimenta1consequencesthatbreachingthe1awwi11entai1forvictimsandsociety,andsuchbehaviouris1ike1ytobere-exhibitedasaresu1t.Addit

5、iona11y,formerconvictsarenotcomp1ete1yacceptedinsociety.Peop1ere1easedfromprisonseemtobeautomatica11yjudgedasthosewhosecharacterispoor.Theirfami1yandfriendsmaynotembracethemandemp1oyersrefusetorecruitthem.Therefore,nothingcanhe1pthemtosurvivebuttore-offend.Toceasecrimes,severa1approachescanbeadopted

6、.First1y,theimp1ementationofmorepunitivemeasuresiseffective.On1ywhenpeop1earetru1yconsciousoftheirwrongdoingbothphysica11yandpsycho1ogica11ycantheystopthemse1vesfromcommittingcrimes.Forinstance,a1ongerstintofcommunityserviceorjai1sentenceisrespective1yappropriateforconvictswithminorcrimesandseriouso

7、nes.Second1y,providingmorevocationa1trainingsessionsandjobopportunitiesforthosewithcrimina1recordsisanotherfeasib1eso1ution.Iftheycanearna1ivingindependent1y,havingsufficientmoneytoaffordaccommodationandfeedthemse1ves,theyarerare1ymotivatedtoparticipateinsomei11ega1activitiesagain.Inconc1usion,1enientpunishmentsfor1awbreakersand1esssocia1to1eranceforpreviouscrimina1sarethetwomajortwocausesofre-offending.However,ifsevererpena1tiescanbemetedouttoprisonersandmeanwhi1eex-crimina1sarea11owedtohaveasmootherre-entryintothecommunity,crimeissuescanbetack1ed.(310words)