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1、2024年龙居翼语侯后笫分会典专题07被后碟笫错感佝箪掘多委材的察1(狗一句一丈)(皆褊依)O1-情感细节描写紧张P102.情感细节描写喜乐.P203情感细节描写惊恐P204-情感细节描写吃惊.P305-情感细节描写激动与兴奋P406情感细节描写感激与感动P507-情感细节描写焦虑与担忧P608-情感细节描写生气和愤怒P609情感细节描写悲伤、沮丧和孤独P701情感细节描写紧张一、情感细节类词汇1 .形容i司/副i司:nervous,uneasy,tense,anxious,nervous1y2 .名词/动词:tension,anxiety,tremb1e,shake3 .固定短语:OIIes
2、heartbe/f1yintoonesmouth心提到嗓子眼af1ood/WaVeoftension一阵紧张With/havebutterf1iesinonesstomach心里发慌tremb1ewithanxiety焦虑不安二、按要求完成句子1 .当我站在后台的时候,我紧张极了。WhenIwasstandingbackstage,IicrvousiiessZtcnsionCamCf1oodingOVerme.(无灵主语句)2 .当叫到我的名字时,我感到心里忐忑不安。Whenmynamewasca11edICniIIC1fee1butterf1iesinmystomach.(名词+介词短语)3
3、 .我颤抖着双腿来到了舞台上。我手心冒汗,心跳加速。MVtremb1ingIeBSbroughtmeonStaRaandIcou1dfee1myPahT1SSMeatinNandheartracing.(无灵主语句)4.挤满观众的大厅让我更加紧张起来,我的心扑通扑通地好像要跳出来了。Theha11crowdedwithaudiencemademeevenmoreuneasy.MyheartwasDoundine/thumpinvhard,asifitWereaboutt。pop.(夸张的修辞手法)5 .我紧张地站在那里,喉咙发紧,不知道下一步怎么办。Istoodtheres。nervous1y
4、thatIfe1tm、threattiqht,wonderingwhattodonext.(so.that.)三、用合适的衔接过渡词将上面各句连句成篇WhenIwasstandingbackstage,nervousnessCamefIccdinDoverne.Whenmynamewasca11edIcou1dfee1butterf1iesinm、stomach.Mytremb1ing1egsbroughtmeonstage,andIcou1dfee1myIMdmSSNeatineandheartracing.However,theha11crowdedwithaudiencemademeev
5、enmoreuneasy.MyheartwasP(H1ndine/thumuinehard,asifitwereabouttopop.Istoodtheresonervous1ythatIfe1tmythroattight,wonderingwhattodonext.02情感细节描写一喜乐一、情感细节类词汇1形容词/副词/名词:joy,joyft1,joyfu11y,p1eased,p1easant,p1easure,g1ad,g1ad1y,enjoy,enjoyab1e,happy,happiness,happi1y,de1ight,de1ighted,cheerfu1,cheerfu11y
6、,overjoyed,merry,merri1y2.短语:toonesde1ight/joyZhappinessZp1easure,beseizedbyjoy,beovercomewithhappiness,bewi1dwithjoy二、按要求完成句子1 .得知孩子们的主意,MrSMeredi1h非常高兴,她笑得很灿烂。1earningthechi1drensidea,MrsMeredithwasSOD1CaS1dadha)Dvde1iqhtedCheerfi11/oVerioSedthatSheSmiICdbriXh11、.(so.that)2 .孩子们开始高兴地准备爆米花。Thechi1d
7、rengotdowntoDrCDaringDOPCOn1haDpi1y/ChCCrfUIoioyfu11mei1v.(副词)3 .他们带着一篮子爆米花,兴高采烈地前往Bernard家告诉他这个好计划。Withabasketofpopcorn,theyIc1t1brBernardshouseChCCITUII、tosharewithBernardthegoodp1an.(副词)4 .听到他们的话,Bernard高兴地几乎跳了起来,热泪盈眶。Hearingwhatheysaid,BernardwassoCkIinhtedn1adhaDDvD1eaSCd/cheerfu1Iha1hea1mostju
8、mpedIIaandtearsfi11edhiseyes.(复合句)Hearingwhattheysaid,Bernardwasscdc1inh1cdnadhapDD1cascdChCCrfU1thathea1mos1jumpedup,Withtearsfi11inghiseyes,(with复合结构)5 .看到那篮子爆米花,他的父母也欣喜若狂。Atthesightofthebasketofpopcorn,hisDarentSWerea1soSeiZedWithhappiness/Wi1dWithjo.(介词短语)6 .令他非常高兴的是,爆米花很好吃,很快就卖光了。MUChtchisde1ig
9、ht/i()v/ham)incss/D1eaSUre/T。hisBreaIdciqht/io、/ham)iness/D加asure,thepopcornwassotastythatitwassoonso1dOUt.(介词短语)三、用合适的衔接过渡词将上面各句连句成篇1earningthechi1drensidea,MrsMeredithwassoOVerj1yedthatshesmi1edbright1y.Then,chi1drengotdowntopreparingpopcornioyfuHy.Withabasketofpopcorn,they1eftforBernardshouseChee
10、nfiIHVtosharewithBernardthegoodp1an.Hearingwhattheysaid,BemardwassoCk1iehtedthathea1mostjumpedup,Mithtearsfi11inghisevesAtthesightofthebasketofpopcorn,hisparentswerea1s。SeiZedwithhD)iscss.1ater,muchtohisde1ight,thepopcornwassotastythatitwassoonso1dout.03-情感细节描写惊恐一、情感细节类词汇1 .形容词:afraid,a1armed,scared
11、,scary,frightened,frightening,fearfu1,panicky,terrified,terrifying2 .名词/动词:fear,scare,fright,frighten,terror3 .短语:Shake/tremb1ewithfear/terror吓得发抖SCare/frightentodeath把吓死(3)bescaredoutofone,swits吓得魂不附体freezebefrozenwithfear吓呆/吓傻standrootedtothespotwithfear吓得呆若木鸡beseizedwithpanic惊慌失措bedeadwithfright吓
12、得要死二、按要求完成句子1 .你无法想象北极熊向我们逼近时我们是多么的恐惧。Youcou1dhard1yimaginehowTightenedBCBCrCa(heaimroach()thepo1arbear.(形容词)2 .我吓呆了不敢动弹。AburstOfhorrorhe1dmeentire1yinitspower,andIwasunab1etomoveaninch.(无灵主语句)3 .我惊恐不已,我觉得两腿发抖,手心冒汗。EXtremeIYfriehtened.Ife1tmy1egstremb1ingandmypa1msSWeating.(形容词作状语)4 .我的妻子在我旁边吓呆了。Bes
13、idemewasmywife,whowasrootedtotheHroUnd.frozenWi1hfear.(短语)5 .看着北极熊的血盆大口,她几乎要吓死。Atthesightofthepo1arbearsb1oodymouth,ShCWaSnear1ydeadWithfright.(短语)6 .阵阵恐惧涌上我们的心头。我们喉咙发紧,膝盖发软。WavesOffearWCHCdUPinswc)tOVC1VSeiZCd/f1oodedoverus.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfe1tWeak.(无灵主语句)三、用合适的衔接过渡词将上面各句连句成篇Youcou1dh
14、ard1yimaginehowfrightenedwewereattheapproachofthepo1arbear.八burstOfhorrorhe1dmeentire1yinitspower,andIwasunab1etomoveaninch.EXtremeIVfhtened,Ife1tmy1egstremb1ingandmypa1mssweating.Besidemewasmywife,whowasrootedtotheground,frozenVVithfear.Atthesightofthepo1arbearsb1oodymouth,sheWaSnear1ydeadWithfrigh
15、t.Wavesoffearwe11edupin/sweptoverseiedf1oodedoverus.C)UrthroatstightenedandOUrkneesfe1tweak.04情感细节描写吃惊一、情感细节类词汇1 .形容i司/副4司:astonished,amazed,surprised,shocked,astonishing,amazing,surprising,shocking,surprising1y,amazing1y2 .名t可/动t司:shock,astonishment,surprise,amazement,amaze,astonish3 .短语:toonesshock/astonishment/surprise/amazement令某人震惊/吃惊/惊异的是inastonishment/surprise/shock/aniazement吃惊地/震惊地/惊异地indisbe1ief难以置信地COmeasashocktosb让某人很震惊gaspinastonishment吃惊地倒吸一口冷气二、按要求完成句子1 .使人们震惊的是,龙卷风袭击了附近的一个小镇。Topeo